Blood Lust

So about a year ago i had an idea for a story i started to type it out. Its going slow but its moving along

http://enterbloodlust.webs.com/#

for some reason it wont let me view the site,,, idk why tho

thats weird here is the beginning



Where are we going mom? I was five at the time the stage of always asking about everything.
“We are going up to Michigan to see your uncle and Aunt,” she said smiling at me with her warm brown eyes and a gleaming smile.
I stared out the window watching the snowfall from the sky. It was a very cold wintry day the snowfall was starting to pick up. My dad was driving 15 miles under the speed limit; the road conditions were becoming worse as we crossed into the Michigan border.
“We will be arriving in an hour and a half,” my father said.
My mother turned around to smile at me but I was starting to fall asleep. I am unsure how long I was asleep for but I wakened by the horn being honked then the car in front of us started spinning wildly. My dad slammed on the brakes but slid across black ice. Time seemed to slow down to a crawl as we skidded towards the spinning car. As we hit the other car, an explosion of metal and glass shot everywhere. The collision threw our car over flipping four times and busting the windows on the car, before it came to a complete stop. I was aware that something was very wrong I felt blood flowing down my face I was from the car. I screamed for my mother and father but there was no answer. The wind whipped around my body the snow mixing with my blood. Time seemed to freeze in that instant, and a beautiful woman appeared. She was dressed in a green and black dress with a golden crown she spoke softly but I will never forget the words she spoke.
“You are my child it is not your time to go my son. Seek the answers in this life, you will be needed for the things that are to come.” She kissed the top of my head and disappeared. I was in so much pain I thought I die right there but a passing car stopped and I slipped into unconsciousness.